Model Forum / Radio Controlled / Air Models / September 2005

You wrote the link to your vid wrong. I had to delete part of it get it to
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B.A. Wrote:

Alix, the one thing I noticed is there is no contact information like

Name of Company
address
city state (prov)
phone fax

Also did not see shipping costs along with handeling charges.  You ma
want to make your images smaller or thumbnails and cut down on "Th
Vendetta ---" or use a smaller size font.  You should also try to ge
the price on top or up front

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starca

Sounds rather over-hyped...

Hi Alix,
Looks like you have something there :) Music and flight a perfect match -
nice choice.  I'd like to see some pics of the kit contents and a rough
estimate of the building time. What engine/battery combination did you use
for the demo? Just to convince the skeptics some indoor flying shots would
be worthwhile.  Maybe a formation shot with a UFO <BG> .  I have at least a
dozen birds in the waiting to build section but I'm thinking of adding
another. 41in., 500 in<2 wing IO flyer is exciting.  Good luck Alix!

Alix, your getting there.  I know it takes time to make a webpage th
looks great and exciting.  I reworked your discription and took ou
some of the pork.  Remember your writing an ad not a billboard.  Mos
people viewing the net on a browser look as far as the first page an
scrolling just add to there frustration.  You added the contac
information which is good along with the shipping.  Just fo
suggestions you may want to take an image into PhotoShop and add th
contact info and paypal information.  This does not have to be linke
yet just use it as a logo.  Bring the price up to just below the log
with something like "Introductory price of  only  $64 US!"  Make thi
in bold and use it as a leader and leave the font size as is.  Cut dow
the size of the font you are using for the discription this will hel
reduce the size of the page.  you may wish to re-size the images an
put them in a table like 3 across and two down or more across.  

These are only my suggestions so take them for what it is worth bu
your starting to look good and the page is coming togeather.

The Vendetta was designed to go where the IFO left off and wher
foamies can't. The graceful
modern and nostalgic shapes were generated for a tough biplane an
extreme indoor aerobatics. The exercise
turned out to be a multipurpose high performance Indoor-Outdoo
parkflyer. The shape is our view of what
a modern Beech Aircraft Staggerwing would look like equipped with
turboprop.

The Vendetta is an airplane with lighter wing loading than the bes
foamies yet with the same strenght
as the legendary IFO. Combining a mixture of three of the highes
strength to weight ratio materials: Ripstop, Balsa
and Carbon fiber.  It is designed to survive close encounters wit
indoor walls, floors or the
occasional foamy without a scratch! A generous side area for walkin
speed Knife Edge, along with generous
rudder area.  It will flat spin and flat turn on a whim! The model ca
be flown by expert pilots that would like
to develop their rudder skills and novices with previous building an
flying experience. The top wing position
allows for unprecedented stall resistance and unbelievably stabl
Harrier.

The cleanness of the airframe (no servos, batteries or receivers ar
sticking out) plus the large wingspan
and wing area even allows the aircraft to catch thermals..

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starca

Yeah! Dude.  Now your getting there

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starca